Either they were really good or the audience is just very polite
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Oct 20, 2014

c1 p5

Transcript: The band raises their hands in the air at the end of their performance, hoisting guitar picks and drumsticks to a clapping audience. Orre and Becca give a thumbs up.

A crowd files out of the school's front entrance at the end of the night. More of the banners are readable: "Northside HS Fall Concert 2009." "Support young music."

Mel waves goodbye at Kalo and Becca.

"Good show!" Kalo calls back to her.

Mel meets him with jumping and shouting. "YEAAAH!"

Kalo turns to Becca to ask, "What do you wanna do tonight?"

"We should catch up with Jamie," she suggests, "He wasn't around all week."

All enthusiasm drains out of Kalo's face. "Oh," he responds flatly.

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Oct 20, 2014

c1 p5

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Aug 11, 2018


Mel is so excitable and lively. It's great to have a character / friend like her around to keep one positive.


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