Silent treatment.
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Oct 20, 2014

c1 p11

Transcript: Downstairs, Becca's mother is sitting on the couch reading a magazine. She hears thuds upstairs as the kids scramble around.

Kalo comes racing down the stairs. "Hi-bye, Mrs. DeFuria!"

"Oh!" She gasps in surprise. The missus waves over the back of the couch, "See ya..."

Becca ignores her and slams the front door shut.

"...dear."

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Oct 20, 2014

c1 p11


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Aug 11, 2018

IronDog

Only one page and I already feel a bit sad for her, as if she has been outgrown by her own child and those of others. That's either me being oversensitive or brilliant execution on your part.


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