Forty Awful Cars? Free Almond Cupcakes? Foul Army Coat?
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Apr 9, 2015

c2 p1

Transcript: A soccer ball zings into a small plastic net. Strewn about are more balls, a water bottle, and patches of snow. A girl picks the ball up. She drops it again once she notices who is talking across the street.

She sees her neighbor standing on his front porch chatting with a woman. The sight seems to fill her with unease.

Just then, the girl's mother pokes her head out the front door of their house. "Reggie? What's the FAC doing out here?"

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Apr 9, 2015

c2 p1


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Apr 9, 2015

Oly-RRR

And suddenly a new scene and new characters! Loving the colours! :D Though they feel a bit distorted, kind of close to the last scene scene of chapter 1, and I'm not sure they are supposed to? But I guess we can write them down on cold winter air and such.


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Aug 11, 2018

IronDog

Reggie's expressions are glorious. I really like the way you've made the seam of the gloves wiggly - it's such a realistic touch.


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