I mean, her body definitely got to the hospital but
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May 21, 2015

c2 p6 (Blood TW, Injury TW, Medical TW)

Transcript: Warning: contains medical emergency content.

Flashback to the collapse of Becca's house. A fireman lifts Kalo, unconscious, out of the rubble.

An EMT attempts to resuscitate Becca.

"The response was so fast..." Kalo's mom says, "They worked so hard to get you both-"

"Sable, honey," Kevin interrupts. "Becca didn't make it to the hospital."

Kalo sits in stunned silence.

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May 21, 2015

c2 p6 (Blood TW, Injury TW, Medical TW)


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May 21, 2015

why (Guest)

why

why


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May 21, 2015

Oly-RRR

I suspected it might happen but oh crap. I liked Becca, I suspect we will see her again in one way or another and I don't think killing a character off should be praised by itself like it's some sort of dare but... these things happen in life so they should happen in fiction too. So... kudos, I guess, even if it sounds wrong?

Though I am a bit surprised you give content warnings for food but not an injured person dying surrounded by paramedics (no, I didn't need a warning, just wondering about the logic).


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May 24, 2015

spiremint

@Oly-RRR: You're correct, it should have trigger warnings on it. I've added those to the title now, thank you for catching that!

And don't worry, we'll see Becca again, in different ways.


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May 24, 2015

Oly-RRR

@spiremint: Really I think you should have them somewhere as a list if you want but maybe not on top of pages since seeing the word makes you think of it anyway and someone who can't handle the sight of a family dinner (I'm not even talking food commercials or cooking shows) should maybe avoid the internet and tv altogether for a bit. I dunno, I like the idea of knowing what kind of content I'm getting into, that's useful for everyone, but I don't think it has to be done in front of every page, but again, this is my view on it all. :P


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May 25, 2015

Jade (Guest)

oh my god


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Apr 9, 2017

mattyboi

Noooooooooooooo beccaaaaaaa


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haha doing a reread. things are a lot less sad when you know what'll happen.


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