Kalo's phone survived the collapse!
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Jul 30, 2015

c2 p16

We're just about to get to the scene I've been looking forward to all year

Transcript: It's late evening. Kalo sits in his bedroom, lit only by his desk lamp, as he writes a note. A detention slip sits atop his school books.

He checks over his shoulder as he signs his name. Then, he folds the paper into thirds. After emptying his pockets onto the desk, Kalo stands the note up so that it faces the door. He leaves the room.

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Jul 30, 2015

c2 p16


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Jul 30, 2015

Oly-RRR

UR SO GUD AT COLOURS

Seriously, always fun to watch what you're doing with each scene!

And Kalo, my lad, it better not be a suicide note. And a whimp like you can never run away from home either. 8I But yay, I love scenes artists look forward to, they tend to be the ones that change the state of play! :D


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Jul 30, 2015

spiremint

@Oly-RRR: Let me just say that I love every time that you remind Kalo that he is a whimp. It gives me life.


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Jul 30, 2015

Oly-RRR

@spiremint: AGGRESSIVELY TEASING ALL THE CHARACTERS I LIKE, THAT'S ME :D


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view IronDog's profile

Aug 11, 2018

IronDog

Something about this doesn't say suicide to me. It almost says 'investigation'.


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